Grace+Ogden

I'm not sure that those are topic sentences - they should be the first sentence of the paragraph as it reads

** Grace's Page. **
** Homework = Child Slavery **   Ask yourself, after a long, exhausting day’s work what is the last thing you would want to do? Would you want to work up to 4 more hours that night, leaving you with little time to sleep therefore starting the next day tired and stressed? Our children are being faced with increasing amounts of stress due to the amount of work load. We as a nation need to gather together, to make sure that the children of our time can live life to fullest, achieving high education, high achievement, but most of all happiness. We have become demanding, controlling and asking way too much of the future generation. “Childhood” is disappearing before our eyes…   
 * __ Topic Sentences – __**
 * 1) Ask yourself, after a long, exhausting day’s work what is the last thing you would want to do?
 * 2) Homework is one of the leading stress factors in children.
 * 3) On the other hand, children should be learning responsibility, time management and organisation.
 * 4) The amount of time children spend on homework each week is 8 hours, therefore being 416 hours a month, 314 hours a year, and 13 days and 53 minutes each year.
 * 5) Homework affects many important factors in children (Family Time, Socialising Time, Sporting and other curricular activity spare time.
 * 6) Alex Taylor, a head of secondary school which has banned homework, quotes…’...’
 * 7) In Conclusion, I think that homework shouldn’t be banned, due to the benefits of learning and adapting to future demanding tasks, but reduced and make sure that the homework doesn’t become something which takes up a large proportion of a child’s time, after all, can you remember as a child spending 4 - 8 hours of homework each school night?